The motorbike race

On the weekend we were going to a motorbike race what was a four hour drive from were are house is  we were very keen because the price money was a lot of money and we wanted to win. So we arrived and there were a lot of people but I new that I could beat them so we had lunch  and then I got geared up and then then I got my motorbike ready and then my sister went to go start it but the key was gone were did it go she shouted . when never did the race.

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  1. Hi Henry. I find your story unique, as your ideas are different, in a good way. Be careful of your wording (knew not new, where not were). Good job overall , keep on writing!

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